Old houses and their noises, what a nuisance.
Every day, every night, all you need is a moment of silence, and then… bam! A
door slams upstairs. You run to see what was it, but all doors are wide open,
like you left them. At night you have the footsteps, calmly going from one side
to the other, crossing the house. Maybe someone is having trouble sleeping,
but… you live alone.
Sunday morning’s are as bad as night: everyone
sleeping, the neighborhood quiet, birds chirping, and something dragging itself
across the living room, but if you try to peek at it, you will never see what
was.
Sometimes you turn the TV on just to have
noise, like it could ward of the noises, but how can you ignore the sound of a
glass breaking in the kitchen, or the shower turning on in the bathroom? That
deep, cold, breathing sound few inches away of your ear, even under the
blanket…?
Sometimes is even worst: I can hear someone
typing, in my computer, in the office, just few steps away from the bedroom.
And in the morning I know I will find something written there, a boustrophedon,
left to right, right to left, in caps as if someone was angry, saying again and
again…
“STOP MAKING NOISE IN MY HOUSE MY IN NOISE
MAKING STOP MAKING NOISE IN MY HOUSE MY IN NOISE MAKING STOP MAKING NOISE IN MY
HOUSE”.
Silence: It
is golden, not only for me, I guess.
Brilliant story! Glad you're taking part :)
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Seriously, the Caatholic in me already has a rosario in her hand praying after the line "breath inches from your ear".
ResponderExcluirAntimony, Jesse thank you! i had a great time writing it, and i am glad you liked.
ResponderExcluirVery nice, you do a great job of establishing the experience of living with a poltergeist, then follow through with a brilliant symmetry between the living's experience of the dead and the dead's experience of the living. Very well done!
ResponderExcluirThank you David!
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